Tuesday, August 11, 2009

Sorry!

Hey guys! Today was the second day of 4th grade...sorry I haven't been posting to busy checking and sending IMs on Roblox...Well....umm...(awkward >.>)
Here is my story I PROMISE I WROTE IT AUSTIN YOU CAN ASK MOM!I hope someday it will get published!

Nights The hedgehog!
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(First she was a human)

(I will make a picture of all the charaters in the story!)

NIGHT IS A CHARATER I DREW!AND THIS HAS ALOT OF CHAPTERS!(Although I started Saterday..)







Chapter 1-The new born


Once there was a woman named Naomi. She was 16. One day she found out she was pregnat. "I'll take you to the hospital!" said her boyfriend Jake."AHHHHHHH!" screamed Naomi. ( couple days later) "Thank you so much for picking us as Nights' parents!" said Nights' new dad, Zack. "Yes thank you so much!" said Nights' new mom, Sarah. "No, thank you!" said Naomi. "Well we have to go and thank you so much!" said Sarah. "-crys- Bye Nights!" yelled Naomi. "Bye we love you Nights!" yelled Jake. "Well there gone now I wonder if Sarah will tell her she's adopted." said Naomi. "Yes she will and we can call and ask if she see us when she is old enough to understand she is adopted." said Jake. ~to be continued~





Chapter 2- A bad choice

"Muahahaha!" laughed ????.
"They have the baby!" said ????.

"Where here! With the baby!" yelled Sarah and Zack.
"Yes yes give me the baby.My plan should go smoothly hahahahaha!" said ????
"Yes Dr. Eggman!" said Sarah.
"I TOLD YOU TO CALL ME DR. E!" yelled Dr. E.
"Sorry" said Sarah.


"Now lets put her in the transformer and make her a...What the flip?! said Dr. E. ~to be continued~



Chapter 3- Hedgehog or human
"Give me the baby and no one gets hurt. said ????
"Oh why hello there I will just go ahead and put her in the transformer haha -puts nights in the transformer and turns it on- "ahhhh -crys And whines- " cryed nights. "muhaha Shadow i'm not sorry you were to late to raise her!" said dr. e. "NO EVEN THOUGH YOU TURNED HER IN TO A HEDGEHOG I CAN STILL RAISE HER! -takes nights-" yelled Shadow. ~to be continued~

Chapter 4- Evil or good

-12 years later (when nights is 12)- "Wake up!" yelled Shadow. "Yes,father." said Nights. "It's time for your good or evil quiz." said Shadow. "Oh..yay. said Nights. "Question 1-Do you want to be evil?A.Yes. B.It depends.... C.Maybe. D.No.?" said Shadow. "A.No." said Nights. "Question 2-Do you at least want to event something evil once in your life? A. More than one! B.Yes, only once. C.Depends on what it is. D.No i'm good!" said shadow. "D." said Nights. "That was the last question and they will give back the answers in a week. -One week later- "Honey it says..."You were born to be good congratulations" " said Shadow.




Chapter 5-Envention

"Born to be good?YAY! It makes since.Only one part of the family is supposed to be good!"said Nights."I'm evil.Maria the human was pretty good." said Shadow. "I have an idea!" said Nights. -goes to room- "Be back down for dinner in and hour!" said Shadow. "Yes sir!" said Nights. (The next day) "Father?I made something for you.It took me all nite." "Ok, where is it?" asked Shadow. "Up here in my room!" said Nights. -Both go up in Nights room- "Its a transformer just like the one Dr. Eggman had when you told me how you saved me!I made it so you could make yourself a human and show mom or as you prefer Maria that your a human!" said Nights proudly. "Oh wow..um I don't know how to say this but...-ring ring ring- "I'll get it!" said Nights. ~to be continued~


Chapter 6- Phone call=disaster

"Hello?" asked Nights. "May I speak with Nights please?" Naomi answered. "This is her, may I ask who this is please?" asked Nights with a curious face. "Oh my goodness your Nights on the phone? asked Naomi. "Um hello?Who is this?" asked Nights with a worried face. "Nights listen sweetie Jake and me, Naomi are your real mom and dad. Please tell us where you live." "NO!I don't tell anyone where me and my dad live!" yelled Nights. -hangs up- "Dad these people named Naomi and Jake told me they are my "real" parents.Is that true? "*sigh* Yes." said Shadow. "WHAT?!" yelled Nights. -knock knock knock- ~to be continued~

Chapter 7- Unwelcomed guest

"Dad I will get it while you look at my envention." said Nights. "Honey...." said Shadow. "Look..at..the..envention!!!" yelled Nights. "Yes mam geez." said Shadow. -answers door- "ahhhh!" screamed Nights -Shadow runs down stairs and picks up a strange note and it says...- Dear Shadow,
We have taken the girl and we are going to keep her and make her evil muahahaha!
Sincerly,
Eggman

Chapter 8-A stranger

"Oh my gosh! I have to save her!" said Shadow. -runs to car- "AHHH! Who the heck are you?! And why are you in my car?" said Shadow. "Listen Nights is my daughter shes adopted!And I just found out that her adoption parents are evil!And I got a note saying.....Dear Naomi,
Muhahaha I am going to make your daughter evil!I have given a note to a hedgehog named Shadow and he had your daughter and if you want some action bring Shadow and yourself to my base. MUAHAHAHA!
Sincerly,
Eggman
"Wow maybe we should go to his base, I like action and don't worry I will keep you safe and don't you have a boyfriend?" said Shadow. "Oh I'll come with you to the base and my boyfriend died 11 years ago in a wreck." said Naomi. "Oh i'm sorry I even brought it up lets go ahead and get get going to his base" said Shadow. ~to be continued~



Chapter 9-Action

"Are we almost there?I'm getting tired!" said Naomi. "Yes we are here and WAKE UP!" yelled Shadow. -gets out of car- "Come on." said Shadow. "Fine ughhh are you sure that we will be safe?Because if I get hurt you are paying for the hospital bill and they are very very very espensive!" said Naomi. "Ok Ok geez wierdo >.>." said Shadow. "GRRR!BE THANKFULL YOU TOOK CARE OF MY BABY!" yelled Naomi. " OK stop yelling geez you yell to much!" said Shadow. "Well you say geez to much!Now can we stop bickering and go inside and get my daughter!?" asked Naomi. "She's my daughter to and I have to ask you something.Will you..." said Shadow. "Well well well look who showed up I knew Shadow could'nt resist some action!Come on inside." Dr. Eggman interupted. "Your up to something your never that nice!Give us the girl and that would save you, Sarah, and Zack's life!" said Shadow bravely. "Yeah that would be a great disision!" said Naomi kinda frightend. "But you know what would be a better disision?Making all of my robots come out here and destroy you both or maybe just Shadow and they take Naomi.Come my robots and destroy Shadow and take Naomi." said Dr. Eggman. Soon all of the robots were out and crowding Naomi and Shadow. "Try and get as many weapons out as you can I have alot of pistols and snipers." said Shadow. "OK!" yelled Naomi running to the car. ~to be continued~


Chapter 10-WHAT

"AHHHH!They are taking me!HELP!" yelled Naomi. "I can't they are everywhere!I'm sorry but once all of this is over I will take you back to safety!" screamed Shadow. "Goodbye I will see you soon I sware as long as you save me!" yelled Naomi as the robots took her inside and chained her to a board. "Good job my robots!Naomi I gave your daughter, Nights a shot and once she wakes up she will no longer be good!" said Dr. Eggman. "NO!!NIGHTS WAKE UP!" screamed Naomi. "Oh and by the way if you wake her up SHE'S EVIL YOU NUT!" yelled Dr. Eggman. "DON'T CALL ME A NUT!" screamed Naomi as she got out of the chains and actacked Dr. Eggman. "Ahhh. I will get you, Nights, and Shadow next time!" said Dr. Eggman as he ran away. (He's to afraid to fight like a man! lol) -nights wakes up and Naomi looks in her eyes, they are red.- "Oh no, Nights I will give you a shot to make you good!" said Naomi as she gave Nights a shot. "Oh thanks...umm who are you?Are you my real mom?" asked Nights. "Yes, now come with me outside we have to hurry!" said Naomi. "Oh my gosh Shadow are you ok?" asked Naomi. "No, I think I broke my arm ow." said Shadow looking at his arm. "Naomi I have to ask you something." said Shadow. "Go ahead." said Naomi as Nights watching confused. "Will you marry me?" asked Shadow bashfully as Nights mouth literly hit the ground. ~to be continued~

Chapter 11-Dad and Mom

"Marry you?I don't know what to say.Give me a day." said Naomi and Nights' mouth literly on the ground. -The next day- Nights was asleep at Shadows house and Naomi had just woke up. "Shadow, i've made my desision!Yes, I do want to marry you, I love you." said Naomi. Nights had woke up when she heard Naomi had made her desision and gasped. "Really?I love you to!Lets have our wedding next month!" said Shadow. -The next month- "I'm ready and I have on my wedding dress!*kisses Shadow on the cheek* "Lets go.Nights!Come on your the flower girl!" yelled Shadow. "Coming.Can I at least where Kibs instead of high-heels? "No, this is a wedding not a birthday party." -couple hours later- "You may now kiss the bride." said The Preacher. -Shadow and Naomi kiss on the lips (eww)- (1 year later) "Mom where's dad?" asked Nights. "I don't know but if you spot him tell him i'm sick and tired of doing the laundry and tell your little brother (he's 1 she had him 1 year ago lol) to clean his room." said Naomi. "JOHN CLEAN YOUR ROOM!" yelled Nights as she texted her friend. "I ment to go to him and tell him." "OK sorry." "John please pick your your your room up." said Nights as she texted and struglled in the middle of her sentence. "goo gah" said John. "DAD GET YOUR LAZY BUTT OF THE FREAKIN COUCH AND DO THE LAUNDRY!MOM SAID!



And They lived forever together!THE END.





A word from the author-

Thank you so much for reading my story!I wrote this when I was 9 and as i'm growing I wonder one thing....what am I going to do in my life?Maybe, sing, dance, write, act, or be an veternarian! So many things.Well I hope you enjoyed my book!

3 comments:

  1. Haha this took.....5 days to write...geez louise

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  2. it's very, very good, honey. Love you. I'm so proud of you!

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  3. Thanks mom..how do I get on that other notepad thingy?I want to write another one...and if I finish will you help me get it on my blog?Please?SUPER PLEASE!

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